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Advanced Editorial Workshop

JOURN X425

41375
Delivery Options Online

Develop your skills in applying the principles of effective writing to the editing of nonfiction manuscripts. Examine two phases of substantive editing—line editing and developmental editing—and learn the art of proposing editorial changes other than those required to correct errors or to achieve a consistent editorial style. Learn how to refine and invigorate an author's style. Try out different methods of electronic editing, practice working with graphic elements, and examine comparisons between fiction and nonfiction editing. Enrollment is limited.

Prerequisites:

Editorial Workshop II: Intermediate Copyediting JOURN X415 or equivalent.

Course Outline

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Course Objectives

  • Oversee a book project from original manuscript to printed piece
  • Understand the substantive editor's role in the publishing process
  • Create a clear, succinct and sufficiently directive editorial memo describing a manuscript's strengths and weakness and an editorial plan for dealing with them
  • Identify problems of organization, flow and focus, and suggest a reorganization that meets the needs of the text's audience and author
  • Identify unclear writing and suggest effective alternatives
  • Identify wordiness and redundancy and suggest effective alternatives
  • Formulate appropriate, effective and respectful author queries
  • Ensure consistency in a manuscript by creating an effective style sheet
  • Discuss opportunities for developing and incorporating online technological resources such as websites, interactive activities and software programs into a text's overall package
  • Discuss the challenges and opportunities in the publishing industry for both in-house and freelance editors

What You Learn

  • How to take a book manuscript through its initial evaluation, editing and organization, and its finalization for print production
  • Starting work on a manuscript
  • Improving a manuscript’s readability
  • Evaluating a manuscript as a whole
  • Consistency throughout a manuscript
  • Editorial memo, time estimation of the work and style sheet
  • Organizing a manuscript and controlling length
  • The lead role of the editor Illustrating a manuscript
  • Lead editor’s responsibilities during production
  • Finding work as an editor and the business realities of freelancing

How You Learn

  • Online lectures
  • Discussion assignments
  • Editing exercises, including reorganizing, finding illustrations and finalization of a manuscript

Is This Course for Me?

Designed for those who have already completed Editorial Workshop I JOURN X405 and Editorial Workshop II JOURN X415 or the equivalent, this course is for editors and writers who want to develop their skills in applying the principles of effective writing and manuscript organization to the editing of nonfiction book manuscripts.

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Sections

Section 075

Jun 03 to Aug 26

Type: Online, Fixed Date

Instructor:

  • Susan Schott Karr

Cost: $900.00

See section 075 Details

Type Online, Fixed Date

Dates

Jun 03, 2025 to Aug 26, 2025

Instructional Hours

30.00

Delivery Options

Online

Available for Credit

2 semester units

Section Notes

This Fixed Date Online course starts on June 3 and ends on August 26.

Fixed-Date Online courses have specific start and end dates. Students will receive access to the course in Canvas on the course start date. Course information will be emailed to enrolled students and posted to the announcements page in Canvas.

 

Prerequisite of Editorial Workshop II: Intermediate Copyediting - JOURN X415 is required for enrollment in this course.

Section Materials

  • Textbook

    (Mandatory)

    Developmental Editing: A Handbook for Freelancers, Authors, and Publishers by Scott Norton

    © 2009 University Of Chicago Press ISBN 0226595145 Textbook ISBN: 978-0226595146
  • Textbook

    (Mandatory)

    Style: The Basics of Clarity and Grace by Joseph M. Williams and Joseph Bizup

    © 2015 Longman 5th edition ISBN 0321953304 Textbook ISBN: 978-0321953308
  • Textbook

    (Mandatory)

    The Chicago Manual of Style

    © 2024 University of Chicago Press 18th edition ISBN 0226817970 Textbook ISBN: 978-0226817972

Summer 2025 enrollment opens on March 17!

This course applies to the following programs:

Professional Sequence in Editing

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Required Courses

  • Grammar, Mechanics and Usage for Editors
  • Editorial Workshop I: Introduction to Copyediting
  • Editorial Workshop II: Intermediate Copyediting
  • Advanced Editorial Workshop

Learn More About This Program

Notes

Departmental contact: extension-letters@berkeley.edu

Instructional Types

Live Online
Live Online courses provide an interactive learning experience with scheduled synchronous online sessions held via Zoom video conferencing (Pacific Time). Learn more about the Live Online format.
Online, Start Anytime
Continuous enrollment course begins when you enroll. You have a minimum of 90 days and a maximum of 180 days to complete the course.
Online, Fixed Date
Enroll in this course by its start date and complete it by its specified end date. There are no live sessions, but plenty of opportunities to collaborate with your classmates and instructor.
Classroom
Take classes in-person at one of our buildings or partner locations.

English Language Proficiency Requirements

All of our courses are taught in English. If English is not your first language, please use the following test scores as guides in order to be successful:

  • TOEFL: 90
  • IELTS Academic Format: 7
  • DAAD: C1
  • TEM-4 or TEM-8: Level 70
  • Duolingo: 125

Note: You do not need to submit test scores.

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Susan Schott Karr

Susan Schott Karr, B.A., M.B.A., has been a freelance writer and editor for over 20 years and has served as editor in chief of UC Hastings College of the Law magazine and writing coach at the Stanford Graduate School of Business. She has edited nonfiction books, business writing, and Web content.

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